Once again, a prose fiction writer lays it on the line. But these are helpful tips for writers in all media:
by Rita Karnopp
There are a lot of really good writers out there who use narrative summary with finesse. I’m of the belief that paragraphs of such summaries are interruptions and distractions. They slow the action – which is the kiss of death.
But, if you must add narratives, the beginning of the scene is truly the best place. Don’t carry on-and-on or your reader will lose interest. Never add narratives at the end of a scene. Don’t get me wrong, there is a time and place for narrative. Just be careful where you place them so the reader’s attention isn’t distracted for long periods of time.